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Reading a novel in translation, it's been said, is like eating a boiled strawberry. Readers of Someone to Run With, the new novel by Israeli writer David Grossman, may well wonder: What on earth was this, before it hit the water? Grossman is widely known, and much respected, for his intricate novels of modern Israeli life. By contrast, Someone to Run With has a hook that seems tailor-made for a young adult readership: two Jerusalem teens on the run in that city's underworld, one looking to save her brother from drug addiction, the other to find the owner of a lost dog. They're an appealing duo -- trio, counting the dog -- and the novel's converging plotlines provide an atmosphere of romantic predestination that's no less engaging for being thoroughly predictable.
Yet the novel seems puzzlingly at odds with itself. Despite its YA storyline, it's a dense text, often ponderously descriptive, both in the presentation of its setting and in the degree of moment-to-moment psychological detail limning its characters. This makes for slow going, particularly in the novel's early chapters, where the chronology is elaborately scrambled.
Compounding these difficulties, crucial information is delayed so far into the tale that, for nearly half of its tightly packed 343 pages, the two characters' separate journeys through the city exist in narrative suspension. We know, for instance, that the girl Tamar, who has left her family for life on the streets, has stocked a cave in the countryside with food and other supplies. But we have no idea why. The effect is the same kind of false suspense favored by writers of popular crime and courtroom novels: As readers we're asked to remain engaged by events that everyone understands but us.
Grossman's novel has won a number of prestigious literary prizes, both in Israel and Europe, and in the book's defense, there's much to praise. At bottom, Grossman has written an urban adventure story, and he sets it in motion like a pro. As the novel begins, 16-year-old Assaf, a summer employee of the city's sanitation department whose parents have been called away to the United States, is charged with finding the owner of a lost dog.
As a narrative catalyst, a high-spirited Labrador retriever is hard to beat. Dragged pell-mell through the Jerusalem streets, Assaf lurches from one picaresque encounter to another, gradually assembling a portrait of the dog's missing owner, the troubled and mysterious Tamar, whom he becomes bent on rescuing.
Tamar, we learn, is on a mission of her own. She's left her home, disguised herself with a severe haircut, and taken up life as a street singer. A lot is hazy, but gradually the shape of her plan emerges: She hopes to attract the attention of a Fagan-like figure named Pesach, in the hope that he will lead her to her missing brother, a heroin-addicted musician.
Their twin quests -- Assaf's for Tamar, Tamar's for her brother -- offer a portrait of the teenage mind that's both refreshingly noble and convincingly observed. When Tamar finally infiltrates Pesach's organization and catches sight of the brother she hopes, against all odds, to save, she experiences a blast of self-confidence that perfectly captures the adolescent's largeness of feeling for the world: "Something new had happened to her: the unfamiliar winds of tranquility blew through her . . . . It would probably disappear in a minute -- but she would treasure it always, she would remember that place in her body where she felt it, where it was created, and would try to return there." At such moments, we can feel these two young people stepping into life.
This spell is broken, unfortunately, by a string of peculiarities within the text. In contrast to the subtle rendering of Grossman's adolescent characters, nearly all the adults in the book read like hastily sketched cartoons. This occurs most glaringly in the dialogue, especially in scenes of violent confrontation, when the translation assumes a weirdly lock-step literalness. A pair of street toughs threatens to "sexually abuse" Assaf and taunts him by asking "What's the matter, sister? We didn't drink our chocolate milk today? Mom ran out of Gerber food?" When Tamar narrowly escapes being caught making an illicit phone call from Pesach's office, his threats seem less menacing than badly dubbed: "You got lucky this time," he cautions. "It stinks to the sky, but you got lucky. Now open up your ears real good . . . one more time, if you so much as tickle the edge of my edge, you're finished." I couldn't help but think that in the next moment he would assume the preying mantis pose and say, "I must warn you, my Kung Fu is very good."
These idiomatic misfires -- and they're disconcertingly plentiful -- badly hamstring the novel, undercutting the seriousness of its themes with bursts of inadvertent hilarity. No less unconvincing is the book's denouement, a creaky deus ex machina.
I was left wondering who the novel was meant for. Adult readers with the patience to span the wide waters of its slower sections? Or teenagers, who would so closely identify with the main characters that they could pardon the book's hokier moments?
The answer is neither. Someone to Run With is best suited to one audience: readers of the original Hebrew.
Reviewed by Justin Cronin
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